Hi Harry, Good start here. Here is some feedback on how to improve/redraft:
1. 3. At times this turns into a technical specification of the equipment, like you would find in a catalogue! The question is HOW did YOU USE media technologies in the CONSTRUCTION… Need to focus on precisely how you used them, rather than on what they are. Don’t delete what you have done, but you need to add to it with specific, precise examples of the ways in which you used the technologies 2. The other main area where you can improve is to include images/screengrabs/screen recordings that SHOW how the process of using technology and the outcomes it enabled you to achieve e.g. camera shots, editing, grading, stills photography, wix, photoshop. Where you don't have evidence of the making, you could instead use before and after shots. Good luck, Phil
Hi Harry, Good start here. Here is some feedback on how to improve/redraft:
ReplyDelete1. 3. At times this turns into a technical specification of the equipment, like you would find in a catalogue! The question is HOW did YOU USE media technologies in the CONSTRUCTION… Need to focus on precisely how you used them, rather than on what they are. Don’t delete what you have done, but you need to add to it with specific, precise examples of the ways in which you used the technologies
2. The other main area where you can improve is to include images/screengrabs/screen recordings that SHOW how the process of using technology and the outcomes it enabled you to achieve e.g. camera shots, editing, grading, stills photography, wix, photoshop. Where you don't have evidence of the making, you could instead use before and after shots. Good luck, Phil